I'm not sure her mouth is convincing enough to be a scream, but this is fantastic. I admire perfect skin, something I lack, so that really stood out for me. Obviously the hair is used very creatively in this shot. I think the only other thing with this shot is that you can see the elbow of the person in the pink suit on the bottom right sticking out. So overall, I feel like this could look more convincing, but it's a very creative concept and the colors are excellent.